This really wasn't that bad. In fact, it made me laugh. Granted, the ending was a bit predictable, but it was still amusing for a short flash submission (and this honestly was a pretty good effort for your first flash movie). In the future, try and work on improving the hands of the human characters in your movies. Aside from that, it was pretty good!

wow.

About time someone killes off the dough dude. that was a good laugh.

aww

that was so cute, nice for a first, but i saw that ending coming a mile away.

It was kinda cute though...

Not as bad as you said it was in your description, and not too bad at all for a first. The ending is a bit predictable, but funny nonetheless.

((( WHOO HOOO )))

Ha that was cute, the audio could be abit louder as it was kinda hard to hear, the ending was great and the blood part had me rolling so notbad, ha, poke the dough lol...

~X~