not bad at all
I'd like to see it when it's finished. I think its pretty ok so far, a bit of a cliffhager tho =)
The art is a touch rough, but if thats your style, thats cool. And the speech bubble thing is original.
Naturally, due to it's incompleteness, I cant vote high, and those hands really do need a revamp *shudder*. But i bet it'll turn out ok. Good job dude.