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The Immortal Chronicles

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Though not my first attempta t Flash this is our first completed work. Even though its short we're posting it to get truthful critiques on our stuff.

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Slow, very slow...

It was preety good, animation was almost horrible though. And it took forever to get to the action scene.

cool.

Looks like the begginning of a great series!The "fog" in the beginning looked really cool too,keep up the great work!

-cd-

ok

it needs work. the action wasnt bad, if only it could have been better animated. i have no problem with stick figures kicking eachothers arses as long as they look good doing it. in this case the stick figures were too stiff and well thats that. now im off to see #2.

Ahem..

To the guy who posted before me..
This isn't Highlander. This is a fantasy creation of our own, meaning anything can happen. ANYTHING.
Who died and made you the person whom creates the rules of fantasy?

that made me sopissed of

first of all. i know there imortals. but they still die when they have their heads chopped of. second why in the world are they able the summon weapons out of thin air. third if you can draw and are gonna do stick firgures at least make the ends of the lines meet.

the only good thing about that flash was the music. there was to much zooming in, little refenece to the rules of even matrixes laws of gravity and well generaly it was, not horrible but just plain bad.

hope you try to fix this up cause you do have potential, its just even if you are making it the way you invisioned it, it still has to been appeling to others who can see it through your eyes.

good luck on your next flash

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Uploaded
Nov 15, 2003
1:26 PM EST