I liked it! Kinda. Well first off, the repetitive plot. The girl just gets bullied. I don’t really like seeing people get bullied. It’s just bad. Second, the art style. It looks like you used shapes. I say this because you were 15 when you made this and not even Eddsworld’s art style was good when he was 15. He did improve but... Shapes won’t help you improve on art style. It will just make you more dumb. If you’re trying to look professional at art style, it’s not working.