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Oh my dear fredrik where do i begin on this flash. Its not that it was bad it was just that certain aspects were alittle off and therefore caused the entire piece to be off. Your graphics were simple but you did draw a decent setting excluding the boy his features were out of proportion, your voice acting was strong but because of where you are from the english didnt come off the best and thus made me laugh in all the wrong places for all the wrong reasons, maybe you could do a flash piece using your native tongue and just adding subtitles im sure noone will mind much and it will come over alot more how you want it too then how its being percieved now. Not a bad idea, i know you have the humour to create a humourous flash and you do, its just your other skills that are letting you down.
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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)