It could have been better

You just need to fix a few things.

Sound?

The animation was good, everything looked okay (other than the grammar), except the sound. I don't know if you did that on purpose or what the reason was but for any flash to be interesting it needs sound, any kind of sound. Pure silence just bores people too easily.

I liked this because

it finally gave my first name cool acronym. Work on the subtitles. If you are not a great english speaker, have someone help you translate or at least correct your grammar. if you are then i think you're jsut being lazy because compare the first part of this review with the following part.

It is much easier on the eyes, and it looks so much more professional, when you take the time to do really nice subtitling.

Keep it up!

not bad

just next time have some boobs beer and some FUCKING SOUND but other than it was good

Hmm.....

Pretty good actually. Graphics were okay. Could use some sound, and get some voice actors instead of that text box. Pretty good other than that. I liked it. Nice work. Keep it up!