Great style!
I like your style!
This is the first one I am watching, i will move on to the rest.
Working on the third chapter, I decided, to post the previous two chapters here on newgrounds, so that you can watch the story from the beginning at the portal. Chapter one comes in two parts! Theparts of the 2nd chapter are to follow in the next couple of days. This episode is about 1 year old and the graphics are not as advanced as they are now. However enjoy.
Great style!
I like your style!
This is the first one I am watching, i will move on to the rest.
pretty good
good job
neat
frist off the graphics were pretty neat, and the holograms were cool. The back rounds and music were very cool. A bit slow paced , but overall an intresting flash to view
geat job
i dont know what all the fuss is about, that was one of the best flash movies iv ever seen!
Exuse my ignorance...
That was a very wierd flash. Graphics were ok, but they are all too wierd, It looks like you have you have used too many different styles. Maybe this is your style, that's cool. I just didn't like it. The head character for exemple was black and white and the police had colors in their faces. Was this intentional? The main character BTW looked like you had used a reference from a picture of Roy Orbison ;). When the main character walks, also, it looks really bad. Maybe choose another angle, it doesnt look like he's walking at all. The cops' looked relly strange. Is it just me or why do I get the feeling you used a reference here to? well they where original atleast.
Some words of advice: I think you could make your backrounds in whatever other application you want, but when you use characters, they really look stale if you simply import them. Make these and add movements, make them acctually TALK with lipsynching and make the thing more filled with action.
I didn't really get the story, that is mostly I'm sorry, becuase it was so friggen boring.