Far too much slow moving text in this animation, I found it too frustrating to watch, the whole thing moves too slow for me, .
if you make it more more realistic and less smooth with the tweens it would do a good job on ng just do that and u should be good to go
The opening introductions were so long. I swear i was about to close the movie right after the loading red screen in the beginning introductions. I think this is a crap, and belongs in some sort of wasteland away from newgrounds.
interesting. not like anything i've ever seen before to be honest.
funny. an idiot trying to open a juicebox.... i feel sorry for teh girlfriend though. you should replace the text with taklin peoples though, but i like the music. all you need is practice, and you might be able to remake this, and get it in teh top 20.