lol what the .... this is messed up why would any one wanna watch flies screw?!

Needs work

~~REVIEW~~
Well it was very short and didnt have much so you may want to re-work this one, more content is needed, anyways better luck next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs more content and effort

~~OVERALL~~
needs more work but its cool

~X~

ehh

the joke was actually kind of funny, but the flash was basically just a quarter second loop and really merits no artistic praise as a flash animation, after all its not even drawn its just a photo with one vibrating part.

boo

Wow, I fail to see how this is a good flash cartoon, as it kinda isn't. It's two frames long only, with the fly on a slightly different part each time. Sure, he's got a speech bubble, but there really isn't any humor in this, even though that's what you were going for. It was just a couple pics, no background, no sound, that doesn't made for a good flash.

Complete utter pointless crap

2 flies having sex, it's just a picture you pasted into flash and you animated the male fly so it moved and then you added in a speech bubble, it was a 2 second movie that had nothing to it, it wasn't at all funny, or interesting, this was just a complete pile of shit.