I Got through half of the flying part

I was watching the flying part and it took to long so your flash is $H!t

WAAAY too slow!

This movie is slow slow it makes it booooring!!! I can't stand watching them flying through the air as long as you have them, and then sit through Mario's landing is soooo freakin' looong. The only thing I liked was the sound, and even that got real old, real fast.

not bad

u could of made this waaaaaaay better...TELL ME WHERE U GOT THE SMMB THEME.and if its KAZAA..dont bother.

my eyes!!!

what were you thinking when u chose that color for the text and you should never mix hand drawn stuff with sprites..it looks terrible

Needs more work.

The biggest problem I have with this movie is that the dialogue is hard to read at times due to poor contrast between the lettering and the background. I noticed you made the text color-coordinated to the character speaking... a good idea that would be even better if you also enclosed the text in a speech bubble with a black background. (Another, harder solution is to outline the letters -- in this case, I'd use black for the outline color.)

Something about the gradient you used for the sky threw me off, too. I think it'd look better with the darker blues at the top and the lighter ones at the bottom, but that may just be my peculiar eye.

The dialogue contained more than a few errors of punctuation and mechanics.

The story is silly, but that's not a markdown in my view. Good luck on your next instalment!