It's not a good idea for you to lack sound. I have seen very few cartoons here that do this. I think this would have worked better as a gif. I mean, they don't have sound! Randy Solem didn't make the best cartoons in this format, but he was still more talented. I'm sorry the score is so slow.
I do think the idea is kind of interesting. It's just not enough for a full submission. The loading screen was nice. It's way too short to be enjoyable. At least this made it into the Mario collection!