here's my 2 Cent:
First of all, Improve integrated Sounds, as the Rain effect was O.k, but the Repetition left a small soundless Gap which was y'know not so well.Graphics aswell have to be a "bit" better. You don't have to change your Style, just give 'em Movement.Those Characters Holding still don't seem to be very alive, sorry.
The Story itself is interesting,Lone Wolf with a past Defeat :)
Don't give up, ignore those "omfg blamthisUsuxIR1337unot" ppl, for most of them don't even HAVE a Flash Kit ;P
Greetings and best Wishes,
Mardjin