JIM The Slug (#1)
The first episode of my cartoon like slug, feel free to leave ideas or ways i can improve on this cartoon, this one is a short 160 kb short, kinda funny...
CREDITS:
Music Violet-AIM
Also want to give credit to Violet-AIM for helping me with the music and some editing.
My (8th) Movie
~XwaynecoltX~
good
I thought this was good, it is probably one of your better stories, the art and animation could be cleaned up more so on the animation of it but i liked this for the story, You should continue this and see how that little slug can go so far.
-Teutonic
ok...
-GOOD-
the music was good and fit with the movie. the graphics were ok but it seemed you used the brush tool to much, i perfer the pencil. kind of funny when he crapped.
-BAD-
kind of short make it longer. the picture of jim and the slug crap sign went on for to long. the graphics looked sloppy.
-OVERALL-
pretty good but needs work
That was cool
A great little short, loved the music, Violte-AIM comes up with some cool tunes, funny little animations, are you making JIm The Slug#2.Good work.
Interesting
Wow I really had to pay attention in the flashign back and forth part. I wasn't payign close attention to if the first time through so I watched it again. Not a bad for short. I laughed at the end. Slugs do leave a trail behind them. So watch your step
nice work!
Pretty basic, pretty funny!
This was a pretty good flash, though It is graphically challenged.
Still, it got a laugh out of me, that's a plus.
The only thing I'm pissed at you about is now I have that song stuck in my head >:(.