it needs work. but it was good
hey it was really good. the things u need to work on is talking the most. also make ur flashes longer its like 5 seconds. i hope to see the second one
alsomake the guns better and the story line better. a guy walks in with a gun into whatever and he gets hit? how many times does that really happen? seriously. . . well i can't complain myself since i do not kno how to make flashes!