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well that was a waste of time

I dunno

Kinda looks like a Blode rip-off

Much More To Learn

PRELOADER & REPLAY - If you check NG or FlashKit.com, you'll find tutorials on how to make preloaders. This will load the movie and present the viewer with a play button when they're ready to view it. Flash toons that start automatically usually show the author's lack of Flash skill. Also, you need to add a stop action, stop all sound action and a replay button at the end of the project. Right now, it simply loops and the music overlaps itself.

SOUND - You need to learn how to reduce the size of your sound files since this cartoon should be nowhere near 3meg. Again, you can find tutorials on how to do this on NG or FlashKit.com. If you're going to use someone else's music, take the time to find out what it's called. It's not "Old Song", it's called "Flashdance...What a Feeling" from the "Flashdance" soundtrack. Finally, when picking music for a piece, it should somehow fit with the story and the action on the screen. The song you chose is all wrong for this piece.

Overall, this is a poor effort. Take the time to work on your animation and to learn a lot more about Flash. Best of luck on your next project! I look forward to great imporvements from you!

Blam this make one BETTER plz.

Things u can work on are. drawing,MUSIC!,movement was pretty good...i guess. k nuff said. Gl

right...........

i didn't even watch that to the end, it sucked so much. i think i would be right to guess that you've only just got flash and have only the vaguest idea of what to do with it? yeah, i thought so. oh and next time, make sure that it's good before you start boasting. "This is so funny. It is a must see movie." my ass. you're a gayass, and i'm gonna blam this because it sucked, you got that? good. bye! *BLAM*