Short lived

Well that was short lived and I "BELIEVE" this has happened to me before it was a nice toon you have here it was really nifty actually, but too short so you should think of ways to extend on this a few extra scenes then the intermission part lol, anyways nice attempt here.

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too short so you should think of ways to extend on this a few extra scenes then the intermission part

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haha i hate the blue screen of death!!

well

You actually painted a somewhat funny and fairly realistic scene from most people lives I would say. The entertainment value on this was a bit low though due to shortness, and the excruciating realism that is insomnia.

uh, okay

Well, that was different. I liked the first person point of view thing you had going, you pulled that off quite well. The graphics weren't too bad either .The problem was that the sound was kinda annoying. I mean, I could tell you did the beep noise yourself, not sure if that was necessary. Taht would be an awfully weird computer though of hitting your head on the keyboard was doom.

it gave me a chuckle

but meh it was okay.