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THE GOOD
It was a pretty funny movie. Some okay fbf when you did have it like the hair blowing in the wind and when his face turned evil and the pie splatting. It actually made me laugh. I thought it was a good idea just having to fat wanabe jugalos throw pies at eachother viciously. I dont even want to know where you got the idea from. And it had a replay button. Just thought I should point that out.

THE BAD
Definantly not the best graphics. Everyone was seethrough for one thing. Thats especially not a good idea when you have a black background. It is kind of hard to see them. Pluss it was short. Cant be having such a good movie so short. And just to point out that pie looked like a splatting pile of skeet.

I don't even know what to say...

I'm giving you a lot of leeway because this is your first submission but (and I do mean but) the sound, especially, needs quite a bit of work in itself. Keep making them and eventually you'll crank out a good one. Good luck.

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That was the worst things I've ever seen, not to mention a blatant ripoff of the Nintendo game "Ninja Gaiden."

eh

It was alright.. but only for a first submission

The Final Task + The Iron Chef = Sweetcheeks

Good first submission! Funny animation and sound.