Looks like you have piled up all the right building blocks and made this into one fun and entertaining game you even brought in some style to this making it something unique Ha that was a good idea, but it really needs some color, and sound/fx most of all good idea though, hope to see more soon

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This is a nice comic, but you should have done more with it. If you animated it, and added some fancy colors, you would really see improvement. You should get some excellent music and sound effects as well.

not bad

i liked the style u did ur flash, like u sed u dont have much talent in drawing , u just proved ur self wrong i fort the drawings were cool

keep it up

LOL!

Ha! That was cool. Very good for your first, and without sound. I liked it. In the future add sound, color, and voices. Then youve got it made! Excellent work. Keep it up! You have potential.

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pretty good. but you should animate your comics..
this is a place for movies and games ao keep your movies coming