Sad

I'm so used to voting high on ur flash movies that i accidentaly voted 5, but not ur fault...

I don't mean to flame you but...

This isn't very good. And Falador Network has better news than this.

I understand that you want to remove it. I feel sorry for you that you can't.

Also you misspelled enjoy and he wouldn't be saying enjoy if you spell enjoi I will spell it for you how he would say it: end-o-I he would say it that way not this way: end-joy

Anyway, I hope you've learnt a lesson from this. Next time think before you submit. It is very unbelievable you make so good ones. That one isn't good though. I'm not surpriced it isn't part of RuneScape collection.

Well, your newer ones are better. Keep it up. ;)

äbää?

k ill give it short,
THIS IS THE WORST AND BORING THING IVE EVER SEEN!!! WUTS THE POINT OF THIS?

DO NOT WATCH MAY CAUSE BRAIN CANCER

since im giving such a low mark ( my lowest yet ) il take the time to esplain it a lil
graphics:worst ever
style: style whaa?
sound:half job voice and i think some guy making a girls voice
violence: you dont c the dragon you just hear about it
interactivity: what interactivity?
humor:dont become a comedian you might hurt yourself

I know it's unfinished but...

^^Good Points^^
I was hoping that you would use voice overs in a news broadcast style movie, and you did, which was a refreshing change. Well done on the voice overs.

^^Needs Improving^^
In my opinion you really should not have submitted a film that was not finished, especially since it is at a point so close to the beginning. This is way too short, which didn't allow time for much of a storyline to develop, and nothing too interesting happened.