Youve got potential, but this flash sucks!
Well, you've got something as a flashmaker... but the story is bad, usually it's ok to make a flash without sense; however, as this flash isn't fun at all, it becomes something reaally bad!
(ok, the music wasnt THAT bad^^)
Anyways, it's sort of well built, so if you work hard, you may make some damn good flash! :)