Notbad

Well its not perfect but it is a start and for your first its good stuff, i like it could use more flash effects here and there though, but you do have a good start here, keep up the good work.

Good first flash

~X~

cool but,

i think you should add some more next time.

I, uh...

That was just plain weird.

Yeah.

Really weird.

dude, I'm sorry but that was just lame

Try again bud, next time, I mean really put some effort into it, that just sucked ass.

That was horrible...

I looked at it and I agree with burritomaster. (eugh)