Very good
There were two problems I saw with this, but they both dealth with the same thing, pretty much. Number one is that there wasn't any voice acting. I guess that's not really a problem, but it might add more effect if you've got people yelling rather than just text. Again, doesn't make this any less of an animation. Number two was that the text was a little bit too small and it changed a little too quickly, although that's probably cause I'm a slow reader. Other than those two things, excellent job, I can't wait to see the whole thing.