Not that good,but it's OK for an amateur.

You should work more on the style(Ever thought to add a 3d effect to objects?It's very easy and you can even do it with Paintbrush!).
Also try to add a preloader or a menu.

not good

dude... your submission is fine but its quite hard to understand why the person being robbed and the robber is smilling in the first part... you know as in it makes you say "what the?!?!?!?!?!?!" just more practice... and practice makes perfect.. ok.

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Will this was a cool crook movie with bad guys and guns it was a but hard to understand but it was funy to watch O.o gj

Ok

That was okay. And im sure your school will love the guns and stuff. He he.

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I see your main problem... the music goes on and on... add a preloader, compress, shorten mp3... good close up details on the small guy, add more details on the criminal/background..