very original indeed! I like it. But perhaps make each little view thing a little bigger. Otherwise top effort!
Kinda confusing. But great graphics. I really liked it. Excellent work. Keep it up!
A little confusing, but awesome art. good job.
Nice work, but try to make the cartoon-windows a little simpler, in stead of drawing those hiddious shapes. That way it'll look a lot better, and the story will be easyer to follow, and more pleasant to "read"
Can't wait to read the rest...
Nice job though, gave you a 4