yeah,
Your animation might suck,but you have tons of great ideas and there is nothing wrong with your imagination either,and practice makes perfect!
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MY AMIMATION SUCKS I KNOW!! but, I think I have gotten better at my drawing and animation skills by the end of the cartoon, but it is long. I tried not to make it too boring. Let me say agian IT IS ELEVEN MINUTES LONG!!! There are many things wrong with it story wise, bc I wrote it as I went along. I am just doing this as sort of a hobby and I got turned on to this site by a friend.
im a little confused
i liked it and everything( i think) and it had some funny parts but i just got some bad vibes from some sections.i will rate as fairly as i can.
P.S.
Hate is a very strong word. if u dislike something then you dislike it. Hate is never good for anything and is often used to lightly.
ahh, what the hell. i'll give it a 5
good work, it was real lengthy and i gave it a 10 in sound because of the "white stripes" intro song(but i hate rap) and the voiced were funny, drawings sucked so bad they were good. but i'll give ya a 5
ShityCartoonist responds:
I also hate rap. At first I was the cartoon was ment to comment on the urbanization of white suburban teens. Then it was supposed to be about a killing spree, but I didn't like that. Then I was going to have it about a vast conspiracy with the terror alert system and beverage companies. But it ended up being about... well I don't know. I am re-vamping the series and making a new intro (same song) and cleaner drawings and better animation. You learn alot when your second cartoon is 11 minutes long.
Not too shabby
i will admit that the animation wasnt the best but the dialogue was pretty good....you may want to actually try plotting out the story beforehand...and maybe even working with a loose script...but that was by far much better than the shit that other dumbasses pull out of their rectums.... a 3 goes to you
crap
You wasted your time making this
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