not too bad

this was good even though it wasnt finished, cant wait to see the finished product

Pretty Good!

That was short but funny. Oh yeah about the review I did on flash rpg demo dude im a game tester I ask questions like that but if u took it the wrong way sorry. I do understand the complexity of making games though. SRY!

Not Bad

It was kind of short but funny. Good music though.

Sorry for the shitty review from last week.

Sorry about that, i was pretty drunk. "Is this my new catch phrase???" I WAS just jealous, as my submission got shot down like the piece of shit that it was.
You're a good flash guy, keep it up.
-Livecorpse

Its a fairly good intro...

Yeah, I'd definitely have the music cranked a little more and maybe for effect, have it playing one kind of music before the shooting and maybe something really heavy afterwards. Myabe have a little more than just gun shots like melle or just plain hand combat before the shooting scene. For the shooting scene in an opening, sniper doesn't cut it for me; something more bloody and noisy like a shotgun. Also, have the title slam out at the audience. The audiece is expecting action if the title looks like it is going to jump out and kick their behind then you know it is good. Good luck in the making of it!