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u could slow down the text a little bitthat would be great. i had to watch it 2 times.it was good though

Nice work

Well, what can i say? It's plain great, i don't mind sprites, in fact i like them, and the background music is cool, but i think it should loop

eehh

tha story line was good, but u need voices, it would make it better, as well as movement...soo nintendo-ish

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First off, you need a play button and a replay button. The song at the end replayed with the movie. At least have a button. It should be mandatory. This is a sprite movie, so none of these characters and backgrounds are yours. Their movements were few and far between. You are somewhat good at storytelling, so I will give you credit for that. So, in closing, work having more movements, do not let the background sound overwhelm the movie, if you can, add voices.

Ryan

GottA gET AwAYYYYYYYYYY

LALALALALALAAAAALAAAAAAA..sunthin smell like yooo? lmao nice move