its preety good
all and all this is pretty good bu it could use mouth movement but its still good and hope it gets there
benzo12
ps:its way better than i could do
and flade its better than u can do
Author Comments
My first flash movie. A lot of work went into this. I just wish I could have done it a bit better.
This has mouth movements.
Pretty much an abandoned project. Someday I might get back to going this stuff, but this would require a lot of work to fix up. I had some other neat ideas planned too, unfortunately those will probably never be made.
DeMyztikX responds:
Actually I have the sprites for mouth movements sitting here waiting to be used.
um...boring
too boring and i didnt get the whole thing anyways
DeMyztikX responds:
Well, I don't think its really hard to "get" but, I'll be sure to add in some more excitement in the future.
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i liked how u tried to make fun of over-done types of flash on NG...like stick men and sprites (just need to throw in a clock and u have the whole collection). But there wasn't anything else to it. good concept...just needs developing.
DeMyztikX responds:
Yeah, this is just my "learn flash" movie. So I didn't have much expectations of it when I started. Originally I hadn't planned on posting it, but that plan changed. I figure the more input I get the better my future movies will be. I'll look into making this movie a bit more developed though. Thanks for the input.
still needs improvement
I like your type of humor, but the graphics still need a lot of work. Especially at then end, where you have the character most to the right moving... I'm sorry to say, but that looked BAD! (not that I can do better... but well :$ ) You should at least try to have his legs moving a little...
DeMyztikX responds:
I know, I'm not the artist though. The floating around is kinda growing on me though. Maybe you should try watching it 37 times a day :) I'll make note to tell him to look into it though.
Ah...
Correct spelling and grammar would also be nice!
DeMyztikX responds:
Correct grammer is only for formal papers. In comics and anything that you would like to seem "natural" correct grammer is actually a bad thing. It hinders your product and makes the speach seem ackward. As for spelling I only saw one mispelt word while looking it over again. Perhaps you should expand a bit.