hmmmm

this is pretty good for a starting movie but......hmmm..... its missing something. And also the plot seems a little cliche......

Hey, I know how ya feel

I myself am in the middle of making a flash movie, but I suck at flash overall. But I'm sure if you stick with it, you'll go great distances.

Ambitious

You tried to do a lot here: different angles, sound fx, create suspense and actually tell a story. None of it really worked, but that's only because you lack polish. The target you shot for is quite a bit higher than everything else out there, so it's a little more obvious when you miss. Keep going in the direction you're going, and you'll get there.

Oh my god make it stop

I fuckin hate unicorns!!!!!!! They must die!!!!!!!

Hehe

I don't mean to sound gay or any thing, but Unicorns kick ass *L*