naaa
didnt really float my boat needs changes
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A fil about two happy campers and thier bruh with Frost, an iced based creature. With just one objective. Kill (my second movie, please tell me things i could improve and thanx for watching my movie.
Happy!
This was a beautiful flash!, it was kinda scary and had nice violence
Exactly the same...
I was expecting an improvement over the beta. I was disappointed. :(
Slight improvements are necessary...
First off, I liked this movie as a whole package. There were just a few things, actually really only 2 things, that I found fault with.
1. You need to do something with all that empty time you have between when the song starts and when Frost jumps out of the wall. There needs to be a buildup of dramatic tension. It was hella boring right there for about 10 seconds.
2. Did your camper dudes have the same voice? I can understand if it's just you making these movies by yourself, but try to change your voice a bit when using multiple characters.
This movie was great. I want to see more of your "Abominable Snowman" named Frost. Good Job!
Allback-14 responds:
Thanx for the encouragement, i am pleased with this movie. However it was a small movie, usually i would have three people working on the voices and other aspects of the movie.
The next thing i must do to improve this is decrease the music file size i apologize for any frayed tempers i have caused and once again i apologize
Thankyou
Marcus Allback
need some work...
I hve no other complaints other than the part where the song audio was seaking for the chaerecter needed to be matched up with their mouth movement. Other than that good audio quality but, also if u did not put in all of the song it will not be as big as it was. This was good keep it up. Though frost does remind me of someone on stick-death.com.........