i need help on some games to but finish the game its 2013 now im working on a series game wich will have sequels grand theft auto(a good one) but i cant make the actual game i dont know how to do that so i need help check my profile for more news about grand theft auto

Hm....

This Needs work......... alot of work. Seriously though I try to make movies but Im crap at drawing, no offence but I can draw better than you, secondly I dont know what other people think but I'm pretty sure the sound was off a bit and finally you need to work on your voice acting I mean Snake sounded like a 12 yr ear old Grandma, and I know what he sounds like since I have played every MGS game to date...

Needs work...

but i found this to be pretty funny. Work on your movements a bit and hopefully this won't get such a low score. Also, the title screen lasted a VERY long time...please try to shorten it. Not a bad flash overall. A bit of improvement in technique and you'll be fine!

I agree very much so with gunpanther

Gunpanther i agree with you, this wasn't the best it could've been because it needed more work, and to you people who want to blam everything that needs work you should lay off. If it doesn't even meet an iota of your standards it's blam this and blam that, for christs sake do you even have constructive criticism in your vocabulary. While this author may not have done the best job I've seen far worse, i'm not saying you guys don't have a right to bitch and moan over something you don't like, but at the same time where does that get you, oh lets see one less potential artist. It's because of guys like you that we don't have as many artists as we could due to the fact that you never even gave them the slightist support to the good points. Anyways to the author, keep trying, again Gunpanther is right this can be a good piece of work, but you need to put a good load more work into, if your going at 100% give us 120%. And I must say though, the excessive swearing did bug me alot, because as soon as i heard snake say fuck i didn't get the feel that it was him but another poser like raiden. But keep it up i'd like to see how this turns out with alot more work and thought put into it.

Hmm...

This needs to be finished before proper reviewing, however, as it is, this has potential, as long as you don't screw it up.