Shows promise
Well you should firstly rename this to a teaser as that is what it was, i mean it was an interesting insight into the story but it played to me more like a taste of whats to come then explaining anything about the actual plot. I dont usually like stick animation but you were able to give him detail in the close ups so i have to give you respect for that. Overall a decent effort, i hope you use voice acting in the main pizza call flash.