this is a preview for an upcoming series about two mentaly disturbed kids, P.S. dabius did the art work, i was incharge of technicalities. hope you enjoy.
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alright i fixed the looping problem and the staslling before the credits.
Well
The one thing that kinda brought your flash entry down was the music you used at the start it just didnt seem to fit the dark and scary style that you were portraying with your backgrounds. The character designs of the inmates were great very original and also creepy. Overall a great job with the graphics but just a bit more effort into song selection in the future will give your entries are more rounded and even result.
Ha charley
Not bad....
Lookin forward to series
Looks like you got tallent!
just clean up the graphics a little and it will be excellent!
Take your time and i am, again, lookin forward to seein more from you
thanx dude, i know i have some bugs to work out, but yeah i'm sharpening my skills for the beginning of our series, hopefully i'll get mroe good reviews like yours, so keep ur eyes, yes both your eyes, open for charley, episode one.
Enjoy, I did.
Well that was pretty nifty. You certainly put forth good effort here and it paid off well for you. Now all I want to know is, who's Charley? Who's head was that floating across the screen? And what kind of mental institute is this that these two mentally disturbed kids are living in that has bloodstained walls and doors, decapitated women (at least, that shape seemed feminine in the background)? I'm looking forward to all of this coming out in the series. That was an excellent preview/trailer/whatever. The music fit nicely - so nicely it fit perfectly. The images were creepy and kept you in there. Kind of reminded me of Silent Hill, although I don't think that was in anyway intentional, just how my mind works. Something you may want to note, however, the image froze on the smiling teeth with the decapitated woman in the background while the music played on. I had to right click and select Play to see the credits roll with the music. Also, the piece looped and started playing over again - something I find highly annoying. Ordinarily, I would dock you on that, but with the high quality to the work up to that point in mind, I'll let it slide this time. Fix those two things, bring the animation up to the level of the backgrounds as much as you can and (especially if your scripts are as tight as the flow of action and music here) it should be a pleasure to watch. Looking forward to the series itself.
thanx, yeah i noticed these errors, but i noticed them after i submitted it, i guess i was just excited seeing as it's my firts newgrounds entry, I will how ever fix all those things for when i make the actual cartoon, and the images were supposed to be how the mental patient would see things and sharley is an acronim for all the characters we're going to use. if this makes it all right then keep and eye out for out next cartoon, episode 1