I made this a while ago and finished it tonite. I know its not great, but I hope someone can get some enjoyment out of it.
Strange but enjoyable
What a bummer, that was pretty funny until the end when you went to squash his head but there was no sound effect for it, id add that as soon as you can. The character designs for the three teenagers were good though there was something wrong with there eyes, like there were too far open as if they were permanetly suprised. The voice acting was great and i like how you randomly put him in the video game without any sort of lead up besides him saying "dude", genius.
Was odd.
I know you're gonna say "Oh why don't you make a flash of your own before you criticise me" and this is constructive criticism, but whatever. Try and take this and the other comments as advice, not insults. Not everyone is out to get you.
You could probably make a much better animation, you just need to spend a little more time on it, and get the timing and smoothness of movements a little better.
It was mildly amusing.
And I have made a few flash animations, I've just never submitted them to Newgrounds seeing as I only joined up tonight.
Remember, I'm just giving you some advice, not insulting you.
Amateur Flash.
Not exactly a hard flash to make, compared with some of the things out there. All actions were basically an expanding or shrinking of a particular person/button/piece of the animation.
The idea was alright, but it could use a lot more work. Also I noticed that only one thing was moving at a time; it IS possible to get two things on the same screen moving at the same time, makes things just a little more interesting.
What was up with that guys smile? It swallowed his CHIN!
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You're right, it wasn't terribly hard to make, but then again, how would you know, you haven't submitted a single animation. Yes, I used a lot of tweening because that's what I knew back whenever I made this. That smile was making fun of anime and how much of a ridiculous pile of shit it is. Try making something of your own before you review others' works so critically.
pfft
wot is the point of that...u can obviously make flash why bother making crap ones?
Maybe if you subjected any of your own flash work (if you have any) to newgrounds, you'd know what it is like. "wot" is not a word. A lot of it is that my flash skills highly dictated the direction of the animation.
Well...
I'm all for randomness...but this, I'm sorry.