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not bad

Especially for using your opposite hand.

better

the frame rate is better than the other one but it needs sound and it should be longer

keep it up

Good graphics, needs a better framerate.

The graphics in it were very good i thought, but you definetly need a better frame rate with it. Some sound and maybe a Preloader wouldn't hurt either.

If you start something finish it!

The drawing was actually not THAT horrible, however is some places you didn't have an excuse and should have used some line tools, the charachters are kinda ugly (guess they were ment to be that way). But the worst part by far was that you seemed to start some type of story line that went absolutly no where. The master did not flip out as if his pupil went to the dark side or something... you just began something of a story line and then cut it, in fact you looped it so I end up watching it again thinking you had more. I know this is your first submission and I'm sorry because it looks as if you put a lot of work into it. If you could continue it it would not be half bad, so if you won't make a better movie next time at least continue this one so that the story might give the viewer some satisfaction. Try again.