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What?

What?

various means of interpretation

well, not exactly poetry, to say the least. The things that were written on 'cheese' were very open to any type of interpretation. I am not one to condemn art in any way shape or form, if what you write means something and you understand it, who gives a fuck who else understands it? Poetry is a release. Not an approval technique. But if your point was to get a message across, then i would suggest making it less broad, easier to interpret.
art is art is art is art is art is art is beauty...

Ummmmm.....

Sorry bro, but that isn't poetry. That is just nonsense. If you want poetry, trying reading some first so that you understand what you're saying. I honestly broke out laughing when I saw that you called that poetry. Makes some sense. Even e.e. cummings did. This did not.

I want a paper fish foot.

Du, meine Lieber. Dass ist SEHR toll.

How it lingers on my mind as a wocket dangling from my pocket...

I have to admit it's good

I don't think the portal is really the place for sutble poetry, but it's good in its own right. Nice job Drew.

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