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Well, honestly, this may have been decent the few years ago you sent it, but by lookign at it now it really doesn't look like much of anything. I like the moral thing you put at the end. The only animation was the mouth moving and the stuff shooting out of it, which was pretty cool to watch, so I know you can at least animate. Next time, add in some more sound, color, a background, and maybe make it a whole flash.