WHERE THE HECK IS MAGNETO ?
STYLE OF DRAWING IS OKAY ITS JUST LIKE SOUTH PARK EXPECT HERE IS NO BIG EYES ALSO
YOU NEED MORE STORY TELLING AND ACTION IN IT ... BUT WHAT CAN I SAY
that sucked and some time im going to kill u.
Well, assuming its your first...
Its good to know that this was your first production, otherwise Id be harsher. Its...bad. I actually laughed from the level of its badness. But anyway, constructive criticism. Graphics, sound and general plot need extreme work. The sound was unreal and dodgy, the graphics were worthy of a five year old and the plotline wouldve put me to sleep if I wasnt a X-Men fan. But keep trying and workinf on it, youll get there, eventually.
MY eyes, they burn!
That was a bad piece of work my friend, on the other hand my first one will be pretty bad too I just retrieved flash 8...or something..., regardless if that wasn't your first flash your eyeballs should be impaled and burned.
Hard to judge this
Next time put work into the pilot man. The first should always be strong. As this is...no, please don't ever do that again.