This was the best one you made at this time. It's probably because it's longer than most of them. It really gives off the feeling of more effort. There's a lot more of a story here. I can still hear the static. Then again, I myself have gone through problems like that when making videos. That's why I don't really do it anymore.
The voices seem a little better this time. You really don't know what will happen next. It's nice to have such style. I think some of these guys have some white stuff on their backs. Something on your fingers, I bet.