Seems things are slightly better in this movie. Your characters seem to be animated on slightly straiter lines. Also, you distinguished subtitles from characters, making it easy to understand. This one made more sense too.
Again, low frame rate makes this to be a very choppy movie. Especially when you have a lot of distance between the character from frame to frame, this just starts to look rushed. Again, there were spelling mistakes throughout this and other grammatical errors that were kind of distracting. Also, the fight scenes aren't very well coreographed, and with no sound effects, once the music cuts off this becomes very boring.