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i see you have potentional but Make youre Sprites Better
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the first one was just to start the series. And the story. This is awesome action! Flips, kicks and more story! Im working on a Part 3. Im gonna try to get up to 10 done by the end of summer. And if you think I should go on say, and if you think I should stop at 4 tell me.
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^^Good Points^^
I sense that you put a genuine effort into making this movie, and I guess you just aren't the best at making Flash movies. I do appreciate the effort though.
^^Needs Improving^^
There was a lot wrong with this. Like the last episode, the framerate was really slow which made the sprites look really choppy and overall the animations were very slow and delayed. You may also want to consider using spell checker or proofreading the text next time, as there were some usage errors and spelling errors. I found it hard at some times to determine who was saying what, there was no distinction between characters, which didn't help the already strange storyline, which just seems to jump to random events.
Kinda messed up here
Ok here's the biggest problem which is pretty much the reason why you got a low score is the very choppy way your sprites move!It has to be at least 12 FPS to make it run smoother!So on the next make the speed of your movie a bit little faster.You're going to get better.
what the fudge ?
I'm pretty sure u had a good idea when u made this, but your animation is choppy as hell, Maybe you try to use more frames of motion tween. Keep trying you'll get there
dude...
now im sure u worked really hard on this, but damn that blew dog for quarters! i couldnt even tell who the fuck was talking at any given time... maybe that was just me... and ur prolly wondering why i gave u a 10 on humor, well that was because it was so damn funny when the guy disappeared after he blew up!