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^^Good Points^^
I liked the spooky music choices you had in this movie, they fit the story well. I also thought the drawings in this movie were pretty good. Not a bad job in that.

^^Needs Improving^^
The animations are very basic and kind of lame. I found it kind of boring how you didn't do the typing animation for the entire first scene, just looks like you got bored with it. The storyline wasn't that great, kind of boring and nothing really exciting happens.

NB

keep up the good work, and you will improve. It was a lil glitchy, but I sorta liked the story line.

I got one question, how come when you click on the knife to play the movie, the corpses niple move?

uh...

bit glitchy...

not bad...not good...

man, the movie wasn't all that great, but has potential i think. if u only improve your animation and watch for stupid mistakes u might make better movies. penis.

hmm

Looks like the concept of, what movie was that with stallone? And the guy with the cap looks like the guy off of "The Professional"