You "pillow bitter"!!

Nice

And the story really unfolds here and the story really gets good here so nice job on this one, you really put in some effort and time in this mainly the story and it really payed off so nice job on that, I look forward to seeing more of these amazing flash films.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much in this one its pretty solid.

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yeh..

He doesn't have as much sex as me, but like me, it's koo'

i thought he really care :(

I thought he really care about her!! :( sike i was WTF he a player. He better stay that way too. ^_^

LOL nice one

NOT IN THE POOPER .... that was gr8 keep it up man