The best part was the logo at the beginning.
The graphics and sound on the logo were great. The graphics held in the movie and were adequate.
Unfortunately the sound of the UPS guy was a little too indistinguishable to be funny (sorry Mr. Hair). The pace could have been a little tighter. I also felt a little cheated at the ending. It didn't seem to be any kind of payoff.
You do show promise, if this is your first movie, I'm glad you had the guts not to say it to get sympathy votes, and I look forward to your next effort.
Andrew Babb
Hoody Hoo Cartoons
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