Drawing could use some work.
I thought that it looked semi-promising, it terms of how you pulled it off. Just, try and make your drawings look a bit better. The style you have, looks okay, but that's it. If you're going to do a Star Wars and Trek parody, try and brush up, make your characters look more realistic. Then, add a Wookie, and a Klingon?(Someone get me a Trekky here...)
I think it would make an okay humouros series. Just work on it, and keep up the good work on the music, and you should be fine.
Respond, please and thank you.