It's just way too slow with reading the text. It almost lulls you to sleep because we have to read this faded text and have to do it at the pace that the movie tells us, which is super slow for some and super fast for others. Even if you didn't have voice actors, which is really the only way to go here for any quality, you could have given us a next button to click on the text boxes so we could read at our own pace.
Overall, kind of a boring story, not helped by the slow reading of text. Animation is lacking, but understandable for a beginner. This just could have been improved so much with sounds and plot.