Bah!
The music built up the animation itself to be a major letdown. It was an MS paint slideshow with wacky music. Bah!
Author Comments
Note - This animation was not made by me, but by my little brother who is 11. He just wanted to submit it so I put it on my screen name.
This animation is based on one of his old comics and this is also his first time using flash.
Make the graphics better
The humor was too....expected. And the sounds have been over used. So just do a little more next time.
Its all right I guess,,,
Its not great, but better than some of the other first-timers Ive seen.
I personally didnt find it that funny, although the concept was original.
Next time, make the humor more spontaneous and try to improve your flash skills and you may have something cool in the future.
Perhaps Im in an overly good mood today, but I decided to give you a 5, but I dont know if my minimal protection points will help.
Ok
the art wasn't bad, good ideas. Not bad for a first try
Hehe...
I don't know why exactly, but the music that you chose was perfect, and made it much a better movie than it would have otherwise been. I wouldn't say it's great or anything, but definately not bad for your first submission.
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1.56 / 5.00
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- Jun 25, 2003
- 11:55 PM EDT