Wow, its finally done. this took me ages, about four months I think. Ive redone a few things, and cut down the music and I think its now fit for human viewing. thanks alot to daz of singy daz for letting me animate and thanks as well to (suprisingly) chris B, who pissed me off every waking moment untill I finished this. watch. enjoy. vote a five!
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ahh! no the musics off sync! oh well nobody will notice cause nobody knows whats its like when its lined up properly. meh.
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I am rather stupidly trying to respond to every single review I get.
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in the words of dell boy, bonjoir.
Not to bad... in fact I like it.
If there characters were well animated and you had voices instead of words this would be a series that I could add to my favorites. But before I do that you need to make your characters look alot better and tweak the movie so its more fun to watch.
ok, that was bad
Hey, advice for all of you: Don't do sticks! unless you are REALLY talented, DONT DO STICKS!
we have seen 10.000 of "wow, ninja/zombie stick kicks: other ninja/cops/military/something odd'ass" stop making these movies... they are the plauge of newgrounds!
My opinion, anyone with me?
sticvks again ? WHY ?!
Music was nice, put a lot of style in it... Story sounds good yet... BUT WHY STICKS AGAIN ? It's ugly and needs more grapical quality... you want to use sticks... ok then make it more stylish ! Per exemple; put nice backgrounds, nice... everything with good anymations so we don't even realise that they are sticks since we're blinded...
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the music got me into it, i could have watched for longer, but theres a part 2 , so im looking forward to it. you could detail your artwork a lil more, and the plot was good
overall, good job
There's Hope
Not bad, this could be a proverbial Diamond in the rough
Art/Animation = 3/10
Well, it was just stick figures and simple drawings. I was gonna give it a two, but near the end, when the red guy is shoot dodging, I decided to up my score.
Sound = 5/10
The music was great, but the other sound effects were annoying, they sounded like they were from one of those toy guns you see in a dollar store.
Originality/Plot = 7/10
Cudos, the plot was simple, but sometimes that's what's needed, and in your case, it works. It's fairly original in that you didn't just rip off some other Flash.
Style = 6/10
Good stuff, the style seemed to fit. The fighting and gore were appropriate, and not too over the top. The only thing that lowers the score is the early scene when the guy is pushed, it doesn't go with the rest of your movie.
Overall = 5/10
Spend a little more time on your artwork next time, and you might have something great here.
Cudos to you
-Master McWipp