well, this is actually the first cartoon i did, i started about a year ago and finished today, the reason it took so long is because i would stop and make others then go back to it. yeah so its prett easy to follow have fun and tell me what you think!
so much.....
work needs to be done, your animation skills are smooth, and...sorta decent, if not generic, but the only REALLY bad thing about the submission is the sound. It was by far one of the worst ive heard, you hear sounds like that off of turds of the week. A little bit of work, and mabey a less girly voice would really help you out
((( DECENT )))
Well notbad, even for your first reall one, it has promise and i like your style of animation and art with neat ideas, good flash hope to see some more soon...
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dud ethis is pretty cool
i see something in you, i have been weatching your movies, ryan, and i think you could really make something cool.
Well ryan
this is great animation with a little snags here and there but good overall. I only have one problem and its called voice acting
Not bad...
Work on your skillz...