hey its me
for ur first flash this definetly isnt bad. its suspenseful too! your good at that...im gladi checked your profile to see if u had any flsh today ;)
really good, and XwaynecoltX kinda describes what i was going to say.
4/5
Author Comments
Hey everyone! This is my first flash, but if the series continues, then you will definitely see some improvement! Since this is the first entry, there will be much confusion, so I understand. If you don't understand what is happening in the movie, there is a spoiler below explaining the brief overview, though I suggest watching it first. Constructive criticism is appreciated! Well anyway, enjoy!
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There is a young boy, writing at his desk. He lives a normal life, but he is unaware of what is inside of him; a potential that has lurked inside of him ever since he was born. But it never showed itself, for it was always shoved underneath by society and the physical, scientific world. But his potential must be brought to life, for the boy is needed greatly. But the only way his potential would show itself is in a life or death situation.......
OmyHomyboy responds:
Thanks..... Suspense is fun :-D
I think I was a little TOO dramatic though, but oh well, I'm still learning. My next flash is coming along a lot nicer, I mix tween w/ frame-by-frame, it looks cool. If you want a sample, just e-mail me (OmyHomyboy@comcast.net)
Anyway, thanks for you response! Keep it up with Rammer!
((( INTERESTING )))
Hey that was interesting great way to keep the viewer interested with that ending, the art could use some detail and cleaning up though, but i do like how the story is moving along notbad at all, keep this one going...
MOVIE COMMENTATY: Dramatic, and intence...
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OmyHomyboy responds:
Thanks! I agree, it was pretty primitive, but it wasn't bad for a first flash. While that flash is dramatic, the next one will be more humorous definitely! After that flash, I'll work on Escaping 2. Wish me luck!
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waste of my fuckin' time. the worst shit ive seen in a while if u make more,........well just dont, that is if u want to keep ur friends and what small piece of self respect u have. otherwise make more and ruin ur whole fucking life.
OmyHomyboy responds:
Must've not been your kind of movie.
not bad for a first timer
Improve the graphics, add in some voices and we might see another series on newgrounds.
OmyHomyboy responds:
Those are definitely high priorities in making Escaping 2. Hopefully this series will evolve into something worthwhile!
Good flash for first timer!!
Great flash for a 1st timer!Good luck!!!
OmyHomyboy responds:
Thanks!! I guarantee that as the series goes on, it'll look a lot better! Even in the flash I'm making right now, it's more than obvious that my skills have improved. Thanks again!